This is a page from my sketch book. I went on a trip with my art class to Sefton park palm house and took a lot of pictures and first hand drawings. With this I started a new product all to do with nature and the environment. On theses two pages I use the pictures I took as evidence that I went on the trip. I also attempted drawing the external view of the palm house with pencil. These two pages help me to get influence into future pieces on nature and the environment. I like these pages because they show I can use my own pictures as influence to do further drawing on the subject. I also like the line drawing of the palm house as it shows good shapes and it also looks 3D. However these pages are not very neat and just look like I have rushed them and this is a negative from these two pages.
I agree with the issues on layout and dead space- a good start to the page just feels unfinished to me.
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